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It looks like a hairy bowling ball and a big apple.
The inside looks like ice-cold snow from the Antarctic or white and cold milk.
It feels like a prickly, pointy bowling ball,
Also it feels hard and hairy.
The coconut smells like a hot chocolate,
Also it smells like a smelly sock.
It sounds like shimmering water shaking in a brown ball.
The coconut tastes like a hard rock,
Also it tastes chocolatey and sweet.

by Thomas Spence (7)

Competition - Sense Poetry

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