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The Sea

I love swimming in the sea,
It feels like chocolate dripping down me,
And looks as blue as the sky, way up high.
The clashing of the waves is a noise I adore,
And I really enjoy jumping over waves near the shore.
The sea tastes like salty seaweed.
It's definitely not a drink that I need!
The smell of the sea reminds me of the holiday.
Building sandcastles is fun and I like to play.

by Toby Wayne (6)
Alma Primary School, London

Competition - Sense Poetry

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