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The Hole

Nicole was exiting school when she noticed a hole. She peeped in and then fell! She woke up from unconsciousness. Lying on the floor in a castle, she was in a maid's dress.
‘Where's dinner? I've been waiting one hour!’ she heard. She stood and ran to where the voice was and found a king sitting on his throne.
‘Behead her!’ the king shouted. Nicole ran but guards chased her. She ran outside and saw another hole. The guards caught up. She jumped in, waking up. Nicole was outside her school. She avoided the hole and walked to her house.

by Siobhan Oghughu (11)
Manor Park School, Aberdeen

Competition - Time-Travelling Tales

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