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Laser Boy Saves The Day

I was running on the rooftops when I saw a dark figure aiming a black shape. I couldn't see it very clearly but I thought it was a gun. I saw that the dark figure was aiming at a little boy called Oscar. I was scared because Oscar was my cousin. Before the figure could shoot I put a force field around Oscar to protect him. Next I used my lasers to stun the nasty dark figure. He fell to the ground unconscious. There was a wail of sirens in the distance. I knew it was the police. I waited for them to come but before they could thank me I had disappeared.

by Jacob O'Shaughnessy (7)
The Beacon School, Amersham

Competition - Superhero Adventures

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