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There is a package on the table
Waiting just for you!
You're wondering who it's from
Maybe from your mum?

It's a triangular box
What could it be?
Is it actually for me?
You're drowning in curiosity.

Are you allowed?
Can you look?
Is there anyone behind you?
You don't know what to do!

Your heart is pounding like a drum
You are sinking in your skin
You cannot hold it anymore…
Curiosity gets the better of you…

by Olivia Hnat (10)
Stanhope Primary School, Greenford

Competition - Poetry Emotions

Copyright remains with the author.