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The Rose Garden

Resting in the soil bed,
I feel soft and smooth like silk,
Over the blue sky I hear bees buzzing around me.
As the gentle wind blows the leaves fall from the tree,
I spread the fragrance, fresh and bright.
Butterflies and bees come to me day and night,
They collect honey like nectar, pure and sweet.
As tiny droplets fall on me,
I feel the life breathing in me.
My petals and leaves blossom green and red,
What a pleasant sight to see.

by Cheryl Shah (6)
Krishna Avanti Primary School, Edgware

Competition - Sense Poetry

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