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The Peculiar Voice

As Brad started his routine check a peculiar voice crackled over his headset. It was a language he had never heard before, yet somehow understood. He knew it wasn't mission control and when he was told to unhook himself from his craft he knew it wasn't right. But he couldn't stop himself from doing it. No matter how hard he tried he just couldn't stop himself. Then Brad floated gently off into space. He screamed as hard as he could but there was no one in sight. He felt warm as he was crowded by light and continued upwards...

by Ollie Rudolf (10)
Llysfaen Primary School, Cardiff

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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