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The Broken Portal

The portal that kept everyone in the right place was broken and everyone's personalities had changed! The portal was in Candyland and four people had now teleported there! Cinderella the nerd knelt down and said, 'I think I can fix this with science!'

Shrek the old granny said, 'Let me go and bake everyone some treats!'

Tinkerbell the sports star exclaimed, 'I can balance all the tools on my head!'

And Red Riding Hood the stroppy teen said, 'I'm texting my mates!'

Cinderella used all the tools from Tink's head and fixed the portal whilst eating Shrek's teacakes!

by Molly Lahiffe (11)
Bakewell Methodist Junior School, Bakewell

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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