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Song Of The Phoenix

Your soft luxurious feathers,
Painted with every autumn hue
Are the most beautiful by far,
Unlike the raven's
Which are as black as tar.

Your gentle song,
As soft as a lullaby,
Sets my soul on fire,
As peace rests on my mind.

Your everlasting ember,
Sets my heart aflame
But I know phoenixes
Are hard to tame.

Your light flight,
Into the amber sunset
Into the river
Without getting wet.

Your healing tears,
Are best of all,
Out of your feathers
And your call.

by Carina McKeown (10)
Amington Heath Primary School, Tamworth

Competition - Out Of This World

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