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The Deadly Black Hole

Floating, floating, seemingly harmlessly
Struggle, struggle as you might, Death in disguise,
Has already tricked you.
Slower, slower, time is getting slower
With its strength of god - the deadly black hole can stop time altogether.
Falling, falling through endless nothingness
The deadly black hole shrinking to a tiny pinprick in the distance.
Waking, waking in a different universe, my bearings lost.
Drifting, drifting through a universe
Much like my own except it's made of candy!
Lucky I fell in that not-so-deadly black hole.

by Callum Pringle (10)
Kingswood Primary School, Tadworth

Competition - Out Of This World

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