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She Was Doomed

Suddenly she heard a loud thump, followed by screaming. London was doomed. She saw fire and flames. She ran to her door. Carelessly, she threw the door open. The flames flew out of the room. As the fire got bigger, she was frightened. Suddenly, she saw a bright light that picked her up and, as she was going up, she could see him more. It was like a dream. Peter Pan flew up into the clouds and back down. At this point she thought she was dreaming. She wasn't in London, she was in Neverland...

by Hazel Bennis (9)
Redwell Primary School, Alloa

Competition - Once Upon A Time

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