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In the scorching, dry desert, an army of workers worked. Day after day, night after night, the tired workers, shattered and bored, scuttled like beetles to build the mighty pyramid. The towering pyramid - the guardian of the desert - brought heavenly shade to the exhausted workers. The pharaoh, greedy for money, watched the exhausted workers walk cautiously up and down the treacherous pyramid, sitting on his padded seat, watching like a hawk! Men stared at him, he felt guilt inside. With money on his mind, he carried on watching; eventually the work ground to a halt, the mighty pyramid was finished!

by Felix Jordan (11)
Loxwood Primary School, Billingshurst

Competition - Once Upon A Time

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