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The Catastrophe!

Kurda struck his blade into Gavner! He'd killed Gavner. Suddenly, he looked at me, in panic I ran and tripped into one of the many waterfalls, I clung on with one hand. 'I can explain!' Kurda shouted but it was too late. I tumbled down like a rag doll, whacking against rocks again and again, bones breaking. I made it to the river beneath. I scrambled onto the river bank. Quickly remembering Mr Crepsley saying drenched clothes will get me hypothermia, I crawled slowly through the snow to shelter. Without energy I collapsed. I couldn't go on.

by Theo Vural (11)
Duloch Primary School, Dunfermline

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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