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The Dark Underworld

The Underworld. A place where only darkness exists. Eive slowly trod forward, whilst the petrifying nightmare surrounded him. He took his first step on the track, icy beads of sweat trickling down his forehead. Blood trailing down from the accident earlier! All that protected Eive from an unpredictable drop was a thin wooden plank. He slowly made careful steps from platform to platform. The rails started to rattle, a train flew round the sharp corner sending Eive toppling into darkness. A loud scream echoed across the whole area, all went silent. The dark Underworld, how dark it was.

by Kieran Gordon-Witter (11)
St Simonís Catholic Primary School

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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