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Fire Vs Ice

The battle has begun. Fire vs Ice
Ice shards shot from the rubble
Sharply rising to the flames
Blazes hung above the fury
You would hear nothing but the deafening sizzles and swords
The blood-curdling screams of power filled the air
Ice is burning

Echoing glass screeched right through you
The forces took in the pain: more hurtful than anything
Sparks shrieked, pop! Scream!
The ice fractals crackled
Conflagrations danced in a vicious tone
Frost coiling to win
Fire is lost.

by Katie Archer (0)
Milton Park Primary School, Southsea

Competition - Out Of This World

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