Once upon a time, there lived a Hobnob family deep in the woods. Next to their cottage is a wide milky river. The river is very dangerous to the Hobnobs! One glorious day, the two brothers went to play on their swing. They swung to the other side of the river many times. When the younger brother had his turn, he let go and fell in!
'I'll go and get help,' shouted the older brother. He ran home so fast, he was gone just like that! When he returned to the river he found just his biscuit jacket floating...
by Nevaeh-Lea Blackburn (10)
St Mary's RC Primary School, Manchester
Competition - Once Upon a Time
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