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The Thunderstorm

The sun beamed down smiling with pride. But the cloud soon covered her bright yellow beams. The rain tiptoed down to watch the sun getting angry. Then the harder rain fell, being the mature ones they told everyone to stop! The arguing went on further till the sun dashed away. The sky turned grey and the thunder grumbled furiously, shuddering the ground, leaving everyone to wonder when the lightning was going to pay a visit. Soon though he came, sparks lighting up the sky. The lighter rain was shy. The harder rain fled. Lightning and Thunder went back to bed.

by Ellie Parczuk (11)
Long Bennington CE Primary School, Newark

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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