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The Gold Wrapping Paper

There was once a man who worked very hard to keep food on the table. This particular year, a few days before Christmas, he punished his daughter, who was five, for using all the gold wrapping paper. As money was tight, he became upset to have realised the child used all the paper to only wrap tne present. Nevertheless, the next morning the girl gave the present to her father. He cautiously opened the box to find nothing inside. 'Sweetie the box is empty!' 'No it's not empty I blew kisses into it until it was full, I'm sorry Daddy.'

by Jade Hutchinson (0)
Hawley Place School, Surrey

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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