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I'm amused by her.
I'm hypnotised by her.

All I see is her dancing in her amber dress
Her heavenly embrace keeps us warm.

The logs are her stage
Crowds applauding
Cheering as she moves
To the calm breeze.

Her glowing eyes stare right through me,
Enticing me to watch her more.
She is gold in this tundra of snow.
Her welcoming warmth is like a precious diamond.

Then . . .

Beauty fading.
Her vibrant glory disappearing.
Energy slowly dissipating

Watching . . .
Staring . . .
She dies.

by Amnique Hunjan (11)
Tudor Court Primary School, Essex

Competition - Out Of This World

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