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Redton's Attack

Bluey could hear her six feet pattering along the
ground. She'd reached a safe distance now, her
whole body was hurting her: feet, arms, wings, tail,
eight eyes, basically everything. She'd just escaped
from her enemy, Redton's Army, from the attack
on her home planet (Blueton). Bluey ran to the
bunker near her house which her parents built; her
parents! What had happened to them? Then her
azure, blue skin pricked and she heard feet...
twelve feet; her parents! They came out from the
shadows of the bunker and hugged her hard, she
hugged back. Her loving parents were safe.

by Emese Kalman (10)
Surfleet Primary School, Surfleet

Competition - Crazy Creatures

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