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I lay in a slumber upon my bed
A dream was building inside my head
I twisted, turned and my body twirled
As I was transported to a different world
I landed on a cold bedroom floor
Where an oak wood bed lay near the door
In the bed was a sleeping boy
Whose hand was rested on a cuddly toy
I recognised the teddy and I guessed the theme
This was a dream inside a dream.

by Jacob Jon Jewell (9)
Trannack Community Primary School, Trannack

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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