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The Adventure

I wake up on Christmas morning
As excited as can be
And there it was, the little dragon
Staring up at me.
I take it outside
And we play under the tree
He's learnt to shoot fire
Yippee, yippee, yippee!
My dragon finds a dinosaur
Oh, what's that?
It's a baby T-rex
I give it a little pat.
What should I call you?
I think Dragonlord and Mist
Wait, where's my other Christmas presents
I'll go and check my list.

Oh yes, my unicorn magic
That's the only other one on my list
Okay, let's go inside
Come on, Dragonlord, come on Mist.
Look, my unicorn
Yippee, yahoo!
Its horn's glowing

Where are we?
We're in space
Come on, guys
Let's pick up the pace.
What's that glowing rock?
This is one strange day
Yes, I've got superpowers
And there's a portal back home
Yay, yay, yay!

by Paddy McClelland
Barnhill Primary School, Dundee

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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