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As I ventured further through the trees,

A mysterious man appeared from the leaves,

He asked to take my hand,

And before I knew it, I was in Neverland.


As I arrived I saw:

A glistening mermaid perched on a rock,

A couple of boats tied up to the dock.

A few fairies flying above the sea,

And Peter Pan sharing around all of his happy glee.

A sprinkle of fairy dust all over the trees,

And flying through them was a hive of bees.

But all of a sudden from out of a cave,

Came Captain Hook with all of his slaves.

And Peter Pan with all his might,

Challenged Captain Hook to a fist fight,

Within a second I was wide awake,

It was all a dream,

I wish it wasn't fake.

by Edie Luck (11)
West Leigh Junior School - Essex

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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