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Upon a pink sweet candyfloss cloud,

I was dancing to a field of fairies clapping in the crowd. 


I saw the Fairy Queen sitting on her green leaf throne

Dressed in my sparkly wings and petal skirt that I had sewn.


As I finished my dance, I curtsied and felt such pride. 

The queen stood and clapped for me and my eyes shone wide. 


As I sat and looked down across the pretty views, 

I could see butterflies flutter over a field of fluffy ewes. 


As I woke up and the dream ended, I had a big smile.

The dream made me feel so happy and this lasted a while. 

by Charlie Eames (10)
Combs Ford Primary School - Suffolk

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

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