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In My Dream

In my dream upon the moon

sat a galaxy-coloured village,

no responsibility but thrillage,

marshmallow, fluffy clouds filled with Cola rain

with no responsibility or fame.


In my dream upon the moon

unicorns as majestic as a piece of china

frolic in delight,

little do they know, they're in for such a fright...


In my dream upon the moon

chocolate falls cascade,

pixies, fairies dance around,

but stop when they realise what they found!


In my dream upon the moon

the Cola rain begins to drip

whooshing to the ground, whoosh, whoosh, whoosh!

But something lurks behind the bush.

In my dream upon the moon

his eyes bloodshot-red,

his teeth made out of jagged lead,

no one dares to make a sound,

no one dares to turn around.


In my dream upon the moon!

by Emma Stott (11)
St Thomas Of Canterbury RC Primary School - Lancashire

Competition - Once Upon a Dream

Copyright remains with the author.