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Harry's First Story

One dull summer's day, Emily and Ben were travelling through a superhero portal and flew to Justice Tower.

Meanwhile, Bob the burglar was running to the swimming pool with his super sucker-upper machine!

Bob pushed the red button and the super sucker-upper machine sucked all the water out of the pool!

The alarm at Justice Tower rung and Emily and Ben jumped into the flash car.

They found Bob in an alleyway ready to make a bath world. Ben got ready to fly away to Justice Tower but then Punch Man came and punched Bob into space. Ben and Emily thanked Punch Man because he saved them.

by Harry Alan Bruce
Johnshaven School - Scotland

Competition - My First Story 2017

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