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Stay Perfect

The sky is always blue here. The clouds are always fluffy. The sun is always shining here. Everything is always perfect. Look - here they come with their stiff white shirts and their identical black trousers. See them marching in a uniform line, see them all smile at the same time. It's lovely, isn't it? How happy everyone is. Don't you like our wonderland? They can sense your unhappiness - so please, don't be sad, or they'll show you their warehouse. Then you'll understand the muffled screams. Once you come out, you'll be happy. You will smile. Everything must be perfect.

by Melis Erdem (16)
Wren Academy - London

Competition - Welcome to Wonderland

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