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Mysterious Creature

12 o'clock at night,

I saw the shine of his light

There was a creature creeping up on me

As black as coal was he.


My heart pounding like a heavy, bouncing ball,

Its shadow menacing and tall,

My body trembling with fear,

As the beastly creature drew ever nearer.


I pulled my duvet over my head,

Until the monster had passed my bed,

Deathly silence filled the room,

I shuddered, frightened in the gloom.


I dared to look, a little peep,

Right above me the creature stood,

Reaching out for…

Hand on my shoulder awakens me from my sleep.

by Jessica Flavell (9)
Knightlow CE Primary School - Warwickshire

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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