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My Bed Is Like A Submarine

When I'm in bed I take a trip

I leave behind a busy day

And dive to places far away.


I float past wrecks both big and small

Filled with seaweed swaying through them all

I watch the fish play in and out

They look at me and wave their tails

Like little ships with mini sails.


I blink my eyes and scratch my head

My sub is home I'm back in bed!

My sub goes diving every night and

Sails home in the morning light.

by Logan Joseph O'Connor (8)
Christ The King RC Primary School - Leicestershire

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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