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Once upon a time, there was a beast living on a sandy island filled with a long palm tree. There was lots of sand floating up in the sky. She began to be lonely.

So she went on a new adventure. She started the adventure she had wanted for ages. First, she went to a scary jungle with dangerous creatures like tigers but actually there were more scary creatures; hippopotamuses, crocodiles and a python.

Secondly, she went to a snowy and a pointy mountain with a fierce polar bear and an angry penguin.

Afterwards, she went to Japan but there was an angry bird with an angry face. Just then, she went into a dangerous sea filled with sharks with sharp teeth but it nearly caught her. Furthermore, she went to a game centre but there were robots trying to fight her in the training game.

Finally, she reached her lonely home but there were other beasts in her lonely home and there were ten cakes so they could share.

by Tamaki Sano
Holy Family Catholic Primary School - London

Competition - My First Story 2017

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