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The Elephant

My trunk is very long

My body is very strong

My feet go stomp, stomp, stomp!

When I drink I squirt people.


You cannot carry me,

But I can carry you,

I live in the jungle

And the African bush too.

I like to eat peanuts, chew, chew, chew!

I make a funny noise from my trunk, brrrr!


My skin is tough and grey

I'm the oldest animal,

So listen to what I say!

When I'm hot I like a muddy bath

My favourite back scratcher is a tree.


I'm an elephant, can't you see!

by Tessa-May Jordan (5)
Milton Park Primary School - Hampshire

Competition - Poetry Safari

Copyright remains with the author.