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When I Had Cheese Before Bed

Welcome to cherry cake castle,

To get in it's quite a big hassle.

The guard is a giant cola bottle,

Shaped like a sugar axolotl.

In Merry-Go-Round Mall

There's a popcorn hot dog stall,

And all of the rides are cool

Where you can swim

In a giant, cotton candy-filled pool.


To get into Toilet-Tree Forest,

You have to brush your teeth first.

That sound of running water,

Might make you want to burst.

All of the shower-head daisies,

Sound like a rattling din,

And the paper on the trees

Is so soft and so thin.

by Henry Arthur Hart (9)
Beeches Junior School - West Midlands

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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