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Candy Land

The trees, the grass and the leaves all so dreamy,

Everything here tastes so luscious and creamy.

The candyfloss grass is soft on my feet,

There are miniature people who you'd love to meet.

Peppermint trees all different shapes and sizes,

I guarantee there will be a lot of surprises.

Petals as delicate as butterfly wings.

They really are the most majestic things.

Everything glistens under the neon sun,

The sound of Candy Land is one of laughter and fun

I wish I could stay here for longer,

But the sound of the alarm clock is getting stronger!

by Ruby Barnacle (10)
Binley Woods Primary School - West Midlands

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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