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Eight Furry Legs

The lights flickered out

Darkness surrounded me like a blackout

As I drifted off into a deep, dark sleep...

A shadowy figure began to creep.


Fur on my face, was what I could feel;

Eight hairy legs but were they real?

Lips began to tremble, body began to shake,

Shaking so much it was like an earthquake!


A feeling of panic, a feeling of dread.

An eight-legged creature covered my head!

Peeling open my sticky, dry eyes,

Awaiting for me was a spine-chilling surprise...


A tarantula! My worst ever fear

An ear-splitting scream made it disappear...

by Serena Cunningham (10)
Saviour CE Primary School - Lancashire

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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