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I'm In Trouble!

The eroding rubbers under my bare feet,

Lead as shiny as silver,

The pencil trees shone in the gloomy light.


Suddenly, it was morning again.

Lime-coloured slimy frogs

And oozing from the castle turrets.

A huge magma door

With a luscious green emerald knocker.


Colossal eagles with rulers for wings,

Sped over my head.

I knocked with the super cheap jewel knocker.

The door opened

And through the limelight

A voice said, 'You!'


Oh yeah, I'm back at school

And I'm laid in a pool of dribble,

Oh no! I'm in trouble.

by Milly McGhee (11)
Whinstone Primary School - Stockton-On-Tees

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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