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Love Poem

When you're tender
When you're gentle
And awfully sentimental
Drawing lots of pictures of hearts
When the girl you have a crush on
Walks out in front of you
Then you try to get away but she has already found you
She asks you a simple question,
'Do you want to go out?'
It gives you a feeling inside, you really want to shout
Your answer to the question is yes
And it makes you feel the best
Then Cupid shoots his arrows
And sings to the sparrows
Then you look up into the sky, you see a dove
You're in love!

by Kieran West (11)
Coaltown Of Balgonie Primary School, Glenrothes

Competition - Poetry Emotions

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