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You can taste the lovely, yummy
brown toffee tower with honey dripping down.
You can taste the yummy cake.
You can smell the spices coming from the kitchen,
The steam of hot, delicious honey pancakes.
You can touch the spicy, fancy food.
You can touch the fork that's very cold.
You can touch the money they return to you.
Happy birthday.
You can hear the music in the restaurant.
They put their phones in the kitchen so they can hear it.
You can see all the food you wished for,
The yummy cake and the strawberries.

by Safa Bham (7)
Springfield Community Primary School, London

Competition - Sense Poetry

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