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The Dragons

It weighs down on my shoulders and back
Clouding my mind and turning it black
Creasing my forehead into a permanent line
Can't sleep, can't eat, I can only pine
I try to laugh but I'm only half awake
I try to smile but it's obviously fake
Each and every break gives me a fright
I cry myself to sleep each night
My red puffy eyes, always blurry with tears
Each second taking hours,
Each minute taking years
I'm surrounded by a blur of people
And yet I'm all alone
Yet alone

by Sarah-Beth Hatton (11)
Hampton Hill Junior School, Hampton

Competition - Poetry Emotions

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