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Zoom Defeats Lightning Bolt

Once upon a time in a faraway land in the middle of a city, in the middle of the big rush-hour traffic, the noisy and bustling activity came to a sudden stop as a lightning bolt crashed down into the front of a building. The villain, Lightning Bolt, was attempting to rob the city bank which had a large vault full of money, gold and diamonds. There were lots of people cowering with fear inside the bank and they couldn't escape because of the falling debris and lightning bolts.

Over the radio broadcast I heard about the robbery in progress, so I put on my superhero costume and raced over to the robbery with my super speed to apprehend Lightning Bolt.

When I got to the scene, I used my target eyes to shoot down the lightning bolts. Lightning Bolt threw his lightning bolts at me, but they just bounced off.

I ran in circles really fast around him and it made a tornado. This made him really dizzy and then I put handcuffs on him. I was really happy and proud to have saved the day.

by Alexander Cunningham (6)
Our Lady Of Lourdes RC School, London

Competition - Superhero Adventures

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