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A Trip To The Future

Happily skipping towards school, I noticed a rusted old gate. The gate suddenly opened and I was sucked in and transported to a different dimension. I immediately opened my eyes and strange beings holding brain-like objects started coming towards me, getting closer and closer. I realised I was in trouble.
They were transparent, I could see the world inside them. A happy, caring, beautiful free world, the past. I struggled to breathe, I could see more and more of them. This time they were not showing me happiness, just murky darkness. No more laughter, that was all gone. Our future…

by Ted Keeton (10)
Aintree Davenhill Primary School, Liverpool

Competition - Time-Travelling Tales

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