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The Pendulum

The prisoner was sick in the madness of his fever. Then a giant, gleaming statue towered over him. The grotesque figure had a huge pendulum swinging from its hands. The pendulum swung to and fro with an evil hiss. It ended in a razor-sharp blade and each slow sweep brought the blade a little lower. A little closer.
Scores of huge rats stared hungrily from the dark, creepy shadows, waiting to feast on the prisoner's butchered corpse. The deadly hissing blade skimmed his bare chest…

by Caitlin Millman (10)
Whatfield CEVC Primary School, Ipswich

Competition - Time-Travelling Tales

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