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A Reality Inside A Dream

You're astounding,
You're fictional
A glint of faith that's continuous
A high-class grand show
Charming thousands with a glow
Too proud to fail
But loss awaits
Black magic falls on humankind
Four words that bind
I won't stop trying
Again and again you shout it
A holy angel snaps her wings and becomes a moth
You pray
You worry
You're a bit sorry
Still wanting a push
As the hourglass crash
You push, thrust, push, thrust, push, thrust
On and on
So that you can find a way
You turn
And a light
Was never as argent
It turns into a shadow
A silver comes forward
And blinds you.

by Sandra Szurpicka (13)
Manchester Enterprise Academy, Manchester

Competition - The Poetry Trials

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