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Little Surprise

Little mouth and little nose
Skin so pink like a petal
Eyes so dark like it's night-time.

So tiny he is to hold
He is very warm, not cold
He sleeps in my arms as I hug him tight
To keep him safe and see he is alright.

He is my new baby brother
All new and blue
I am so proud and excited
And happy I have finally met you.

by Mia Hill (9)
Cold Harbour School, Milton Keynes

Competition - Poetry Emotions

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