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Lemon Drizzle Cake

The thing I like my mum to bake is yummy lemon drizzle cake
I hear the whisk go round and round. What a lovely sound
The lemon smells so sweet. This is going to be a treat
The house is filled with this delicious air
I cannot wait, this is not fair
The cake is soft and smooth and golden brown, if only I could taste it now
I feel the heat from the baking tray
This could be a little tricky, it looks so good and feels so sticky
Finally it's time to eat, what a very scrumptious treat
The crunchy top, the spongy middle
The cake is sweet, the plate is clean
The cleanest it has ever been
There is nothing left to say right now but mmm, wow!

by Tahlyah O'Brady (6)
Old Palace School Of John Whitgift Preparatory School, South Croydon

Competition - Sense Poetry

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