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Jasmine's Magical Story

Once upon a time, there was a beautiful kingdom far away. A sparkly castle stood in front of a colourful rainbow.

But the people were scared to come outside because of a mean old dragon who lived there.

The red dragon was very angry. He roared loudly and breathed flames of fire.

One day, a pretty pink unicorn asked the dragon why he was so mean.

‘Because nobody likes me.’

‘I will be your friend,’ said the unicorn, ‘if you stop being mean.’

The dragon promised and left happily.

The unicorn was really a kind old witch who wanted to help. After the dragon left, the witch sent her magic broomstick to tell all the people it was safe to come out of their houses.

They all lived happily ever after.

by Jasmine Wood (5)
Cragside CE Primary School, Cramlington

Competition - My First Story

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