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Disneyland Love

'Honey darling, are you excited about Disneyland?' asked Rory.

'Yes of course I am!' replied Honey, as they parked up in a space in the Hotel Cheyenne car park. Little did she know, Rory, her boyfriend, was plotting something even more special than rides!

An hour later, they entered the Disneyland park and agreed to go on Space Mountain, so they did. 'Wooh!' they screamed, lifting their hands up high.

Afterwards, Rory took Honey to a romantic spot with a bench and a beautiful fountain. Rory asked Honey to sit on the bench. 'Will you marry me?' he asked.



by Cheya Watson (8)
Scholes Village Primary School, Cleckheaton

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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