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Back To The Past

Once upon a time, there was a father and son sat on top of a rocky cliff face, watching the sea flow like musical waves being played by musicians. The sea crashed against the unsteady stilts where they were sat, silently, but then suddenly, the son had noticed a large, thick raven-coloured cloud. The son looked at his father in confusion.

As the storm came closer, they realised it was forming a whirlpool. They tried to run away, but suddenly they were gone... the whirlpool had sucked them in.

Were the father and son ever going to return?

by Shane Tull (11)
Portsdown Primary School, Portsmouth

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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