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The Mist Creatures

Paris ran to her dreary attic room. She unlocked the door and leapt gladly onto her bed. As she opened her book, her happiness vanished. Some malevolent mist materialised! Paris was petrified! As the eerie mist surrounded her, she let out a scream. It carried her to her future. Dropping her in a crypt, it left her alone. 'Miss Sparrow!' cried Paris, as she saw her run in. She ran out again. A shivering mist bird glided in! Paris was in her attic room.

The next day, she thought about the future. She'd escaped. In the future though... would she?


by Lucy Holland (10)
Sacred Heart RC Primary School, Bolton

Competition - Once Upon a Time

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