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The Peculiar Creature

In a silent, lonely world

Lay a peculiar creature,

Glowing on the vast sphere,

What could it be?

The foreign figure stood,

Confused, scared,

The destructive beast left a stench,

Mumbling curiously,

The misunderstood creature

Started to spin,

Its eyes stuck in position,

What a peculiar creation!

by Stefano Corgiolu (10)
Griffe Field Primary School, Derby

Competition - Out Of This World

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