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The Dream

The illusive phenomenon, the dream,
A questionable fantasy that lifts your very consciousness out of the known world,
A hallucination created from the depths of your conscience,
The state of consciousness of complete bliss and emptiness,
Your consciousness creates the appearance we experience as a dream.
You are the true creator.

Your only enemy is the delusive nightmare,
A spectacular substance of pure evil which lives on your fear and worries,
Its only obstruction is your euphoric emotions of joy and love,
You have the power over your conscience,
Even if you haven't discovered it yet it will always be there.

by Dorje Prasad-Cordon (10)
Croftlands Junior School, Ulverston

Competition - Out Of This World

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